Friday, December 19, 2008

Poem

I am a scared high school student
I wonder what college I will attend or if I will even go to college
I hear that it cost alot to get into college
I want to become somebody in life
I am a scared high school student

I pretend that I am not scared
I feel worried about how my future will be
I touch my dreams everyday but I am scared they will slip away
I worry that I won't make it to college
I am a scared high school student

I understand that I can make it
I say that I can make it no matter what
I dream that I will become a lawyer
I try to do my best in school
I hope I can acheive my dreams
I am a scared high school student

Poem

His love is like winter
When it comes around im sad
It is very bitter
but as soon as it goes away I'm glad
People say that I should leave him alone
Sometimes I feel so low
But he completes my soul
but he makes me glow
I love him so
I want to find another
but sometimes I wish he would go
but I have to be undercover
I have to let him go
cause he is messin up my flow

Poem

Bang Bang I woke up it just another shooting around the way. I see killing everyday its crazy man people crying and people dying. Now the days are flyin cause the one you love is now dyin. On life support cause he got a shot in the head but he is almost dead.

the poem

"nevermind what haters say know them till they fade away" this song is climbing the billboard charts. This song is really just a poem. I know this because it has the three major things it sounds good,it brings a clear image to your mind and it helps you to see things or think about things in a new way.

this song has one of the major things which is sound it has rhyme. for example in the song it says "you're gonna be a shining star with fancy clothes and fancy car -ar and then you're gonna go far."another example is "where you from who you know what you make and what kind of car you in. seems as though you lost sight of what's important with the postive. another major thing it has is repetition. most of the songs repeats it's self. for example one thing that repeats in the song is" live your life". another example is" just living my life". sound makes this song sound much better with out it this song wouldn't be a poem.

imagery is another way to get people to see what you see and TI and Rihanna has it. they use visual imagery. for example it says "immaculately polished with the sprit of a hustler the swagger of a college kid" TI is trying to get his fans to imagine his style. he also uses sound imagery. in the song it says " the hootin and the hollerin back and forth with the arguing.this is something you can hear.this makes the song even more into a poem.

the last thing this song has is ti changes your mind on things. for example TI critizies the way the rap game is right now. he changes my mind on who i think I'm listening to is it really hip hop. another example is when he says just keep getting your money but watch what you do with it. this last thing makes this song a complete poem

this song has everything to be a poem it has sound, it brings a clear picture to your mind, it also changes your mind on things.

Friday, December 5, 2008

website 3

trey-mlb.com-you can shop online for tickets and look up stats of baseball players.
vocabtest.com-it helps you with sat prep and psat prep help you study for those test

Wednesday, December 3, 2008

websites 2

kayleah- sparknotes.com-it helps you with school it also help u with understanding a book-4
www.need2know.co.uk-it gives you advice on things you might need help with-5

Gabi-nndb.com- helps you with nhd and it is a tracking website.
www.freelibary.com-you can look up books
www.abercrombie.com-you can look up colthes

ji li-american eagle.com-you ccan buy colthes online
www.timeonlines.com- good for nhd project or any research project
americaneagle.com- you can go shopping online

brianna- areopastle.com-cheap shirts and you can shop online

Monday, December 1, 2008

websites

www.edheads.com-stephen- it can help you learn science and it helps learn how to do different types of surgery.i give him a 5.
www.applebees.com this helps you find the nearest place near your house you and you can order your food online.4
www.hell.com- its just like google it can help you with research.3

imayah-www.biography.com it an help you with your research and you can watch videos on your person and you can look up pictures.
www. tickle.com -i give her a 5 for both website they are both very good websites to help me with nhd

desiree- algebra.com- it can help me solve my math problems but it is not very colorful. i give this website a 3
www.myfoxphilly.com- you can get to catch up on the news if you do not get a catch to watch it on t.v i give this website a5

jazimine b.-www.historynet.com-it can help you with nhd it gives you aarticles on your person
www.candystand.com-it it a fun game site i gave both sites 4

brianna- www.seventeen.com- you can learn about your health
www.zoom.org- you can learn about science and animals

saleece-bbc.co.uk-it can help u learn what is going on around the world.